One problem: some lines seem to have lost the first letter after the colon. I noticed it more in Part 2 than Part 1. A sample: JOHN: aptain! SHERLOCK: han Martin Crieff. JOHN: Then who was texting me all this time? That’s not your phone! SHERLOCK: artin—but only on my express orders. How did you find out that I was here? JOHN: called you—well, Douglas—about the lawsuit. It’s where Martin would’ve gone. SHERLOCK: ’m astonished that you found this location. I know my brother thinks Douglas is at least somewhat intelligent, but the sheer importance of this case—No, you still don’t know, do you?
The MJN dialogue in particular really shines! Arthur is BRILLIANT! I did think Martin was even worse than usual, but I didn't realize that was Sherlock pretending to be Martin! Douglas was fun, as always.
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JOHN: aptain!
SHERLOCK: han Martin Crieff.
JOHN: Then who was texting me all this time? That’s not your phone!
SHERLOCK: artin—but only on my express orders. How did you find out that I was here?
JOHN: called you—well, Douglas—about the lawsuit. It’s where Martin would’ve gone.
SHERLOCK: ’m astonished that you found this location. I know my brother thinks Douglas is at least somewhat intelligent, but the sheer importance of this case—No, you still don’t know, do you?
The MJN dialogue in particular really shines! Arthur is BRILLIANT! I did think Martin was even worse than usual, but I didn't realize that was Sherlock pretending to be Martin! Douglas was fun, as always.